Friday, August 31, 2007

Digestive System

Hai....... i'm a cake, i will move into human body



***MOUTH***


Now im in the mouth, i see a teeth. mouth has a lot fungtion like eating or drinking and more.wow, the mouth is big
auch........... the teeth bite me,it's hurt

aaa.......... i'm fall down !!!


***ESOPHAGUS***

wow i'm in the esophagus, the esophagus is really long and i need a rope!!!
Esophagus is a organ.Esophagus is long, it's verry-verry long.


Esophagus has a fangtions like,I pass by esophagus and esophagus can make me fall down to the stomach

***STOMACH***

a..... i'm fall down again!!! hey im in the stomach.
i think the stomach is big, when i a human i think the stomach is small.Stomach is an organ in our body. stomach can keep food and share to fat and small intestine.


stonmach has a fungtion too,like stomach is a highly acid production and secretion which produces a lumilah and pH range usually between 1 and 4 depending on species, food intake time of the day ,drug use, and other factors.


hey there is a holl.


***SMALL INTESTINE ***


i'm in the small intestine now......

The small intestine is a convoluted tube averaging 6 meters in length. It extends from the pylorus to the ileocecal valve , where it ends in the large intestine. It is contained in the central and lower part of the abdominal cavity, surrounded above and at the sides by the large intestine; a portion of it extends below the superior aperture of the pelvis and lies in front of the rectum. It is in relation, in front, with the greater omentum and abdominal parietes, and is connected to the vertebral column and posterior wall of the abdominal wall by the mesentery . The small intestine is divisible into three portions: duodenum, jejunum, and ileum. The small intestine contains the same four muscular layers seen in the rest of the GI tract: serous, muscular, areolar, and mucosa. However, the mucosa and submucosa layers have modifications that reflect its relative location in the digestive pathway, providing increased surface area for absorption


***LARGE INTESTINE***

Many people often confuse the large intestine with the small intestine. However the large intestine is wider yet shorter than the small intestine (in humans around 5 feet in length as compared with 22 - 25 feet, or 6.7 - 7.6 meters, for the small intestine) and has a smooth inner wall.

2 Comments:

Blogger Mrs. Jane said...

Hi Jesslyn. Your total score is 17/40. You got the following:
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I’m proud of you for changing your writing to your own words. See me for 10 bonus language points.

September 6, 2007 at 5:00 AM  
Blogger liza said...

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September 7, 2007 at 10:01 PM  

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