Thursday, September 13, 2007

What Is God?

God is a human just like us.God made us.God saves us.God was born from Maria.God died for us.God is not different, god also saviour,He saved our lives.We can't see God but,God can see us,God knows what we do.God love us,god love every bodyand animals too.God gave us food,God gave us homes,God gave us clouts and God gave us energy.We pray it's mean we talk to God.

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Blogger Mrs. Jane said...

Hi Jesslyn, Well done! You have small errors which are mostly typing ones. You need put a space after every full stop. 7/10
God is a human just like us. God made us. God saves us. God was born from Maria. God died for us. God is not different, God is also our saviour. He saves our lives. We can't see God but, God can see us. God knows what we do. God loves us. God loves everybody and all the animals too. God gives us food. God gives us homes. God gives us clouds and God gives us energy. When we praying, it means that we are talking to God.

September 19, 2007 at 6:21 AM  

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